Carla Capra Anderson |
WEYG Clubs ~ CRITIQUES CORNER WEYG Club Members, submit a photo here to receive constructive suggestions on how to improve your image.
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Merna L. Nobile |
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Carla Capra Anderson |
Past its Prime. Merna this is a lovely image. My first thought is that because of the exposure it is difficult to focus on the old tractor. What would happen if you lightened up the exposure on the tractor?
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Merna L. Nobile |
Thank you very much Carla, I will give it a try Merna
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Carla Capra Anderson |
WEYG club, you can also post your suggestions and comments directly to a photo (in this instance, Merna's) by clicking on her image. Then leave your comment as you usually do.
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Carla Capra Anderson |
I have played around with this image in PSE6. I can successfully add a layer of hair, that I copied from another image, to fill in and conceal the harsh lighting in her hair and over her ear. But, that still leaves the harsh lighting in the temple area. I wasn't able to successfully use that same technique over the temple. I'm open to all suggestions. Help!?! Thanks, Carla
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Merna L. Nobile |
Hi Carla: This is such a beautiful image of a very pretty young woman. You have captured her beauty and I understand what you’re saying about the light. I am no expert, but this is what I would try: Make a duplicate, and magnify the image to make it larger. Than I would use the clone tool starting with her face, using the skin tone from her face that you would like to see on the bright skin. Adjust the size if the clone tool so that it works best for you. When you do the hair, be sure to capture the highlights, so that you don’t make it all one color. Repeat with the ear. I hope this helps, Merna
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Merna L. Nobile |
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- Christine Lobsinger Contact Christine Lobsinger Christine Lobsinger's Gallery |
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Kim Andelkovic |
X & O's This is jmo......I'm not to crazy about the angle really but I can see why you have done it......I would crop off the bottom just above the mans head bottom LHS and keeping the bar straight in the middle and maybe use some curves to tone done the flash light as its a bit harsh.
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Kim Andelkovic |
Past & Prime - Again jmo.......this image looks very busy.....I would try and blur the BG....lighten the shadows and maybe bring out the rusty colour in the tractor.....you could even add some flowers for colour in the FG.......not to sure how that would look but it could be worth a try. :-)
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Merna L. Nobile |
Hi Christine: Please forgive me, but I am little new at the business of talking about someone else's image. First of all I would go to “view” and magnify this image to see if you can take the circles out of the existing photograph, since you mentioned that you wanted some circles for the contest. If you can do this, play with it with some of your filters and see what you can do to enhance to circles. I hope that I have been helpful to you, my good friend. Merna
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- Christine Lobsinger Contact Christine Lobsinger Christine Lobsinger's Gallery |
Ok thank you gals... I messed up here with two images, but the wrong one would upload here and not the one I wanted too.. so, I deleted them, and will try again..trying your suggestions.. I even lost Teresa's suggestions... CHris
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- Christine Lobsinger Contact Christine Lobsinger Christine Lobsinger's Gallery |
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- Christine Lobsinger Contact Christine Lobsinger Christine Lobsinger's Gallery |
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Carla Capra Anderson |
I like it.
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Lynn R. Powers |
I do not know what the WEYG Club is but the bottom half of the Discussion page has sections for Critique, Praise, Where am I?, Digital Art plus there are already places to post your Editors First Picks and Finalists. Please use those sections for showing your work. Specific questions about photography belong here. Thanks,
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Carla Capra Anderson |
Hi Lynn, Our club is called, "What Else You Got". Please stop in and see what the club is all about. We have an amazing membership of talented photographers; we share ideas, ask questions about technique and more... We hope you'll join the fun. Enjoy, Carla
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Carla Capra Anderson |
What do you think? Suggestions? Tips?
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Kim Andelkovic |
Fantastic Job Carla......I really love the new one......you have made the whole image pop now. :-)
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Carla Capra Anderson |
Thanks Kim :)
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Nancie M. DeMellia |
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Carla Capra Anderson |
Hi Nancie. I like this. It has the look of an oil painting, similar to the old masters...except it's new, lol. How did you achieve this look? Carla
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Nancie M. DeMellia |
I used Foto Sketcher and yes it was oil painting effect
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Merna L. Nobile |
Thanks you, Merna Nobile
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